I wrote something today inspired by certain circumstances that you may have heard about in the media. It's a rough first draft, but here's an extract:
“The university had been aflame for months. Some faculties such as Natural Philosophy and the Department of Hydrothermal Mechanics cobbled together engines from rubber hoses and old bathtubs of rainwater collected through smashed ceilings or in the few quadrangles not open to sniper fire in order to tackle the blaze wherever it encroached upon their territories. Others were not so fortunate: the poets watched sadly, with trembling lips and pens ascribble, as their halls were reduced to dark oaken ashes.
Government troops had issued the ultimatum: pay us what’s ours or we’ll come in and take it. The bean counters responded by reassuring themselves of the strength of their barricades and that, while the coin still flowed (even at a trickle) they would still remain to tap it. Casualties were many and missed. Students and academics tried to continue their activities as best they could.
One particularly striking set of lightprints that made the papers was of an assault on the eastern wing. A large lizard, one eye encircled by a monacle imprinted with targeting marks and with ragged filigree extending from its brain to a repeating rifle embedded in its back, scales a tower and makes a furtive entrance. A student can be seen struggling with the creature, eventually wresting back the tome it sought to steal and pawn for a few coppers, and next he is seen putting a deftly-aimed round through it’s unnaturally augmented head. In the final picture we see a sullen administrator demanding the hard-won book, presumably to line his own pockets or to fund the School of Mercantile Enterprise, one of the few faculties that the higher-ups deemed consequential and, of course, profitable.”
Harsh times indeed.
I smiled while reading this, primarily because, to an extent, it's already happening. Sad times seem to loom ahead...
ReplyDeleteWriting it came easily, simply because we're in the mist of the situation it's based on right now. I couldn't have asked for a better situation to put to paper, story wise, but in terms of living it the exact opposite is true. From adversity, productivity.
ReplyDeleteI'm wondering whether to write a full short-story or fit this into the novel somehow.
there's a novel there i'd say.
ReplyDeletehallucinatory and violent, my favourite.
hell in a handcart i tell you!
Cheers, glad you liked it!
ReplyDeleteIt needs a lot of work. It has some very long, rambling sentences for a start, something I've been finding difficult to exorcise from my writing.
I think I'll probably work it into the novel as background detail: with the city I'm writing about, nobody would really bat an eye at this sort of thing going on around them!
Either that or if I DID do it as a short-story, I could put it in for the Creative Writing Comp. this year. It's topical, definately - I doubt it'd win the "Archchancellor's Prize" though ;)